Angel of Death

This was short and to the point but it was very powerful. Yeah I agree with anyone who says smoking is just a nasty death sentence. Well anyways great poem.

Raven i am: in love i wonder: if you notice you got me hypnotized i hear: your voice when I close my eyes i see: you in my dreams i ...

I didn't expect the ending line " God is not a Man" this really made this poem dramatic and brilliant. Lovely!! Keep up the good work.

This was really gentle, and beautiful but I felt as if the two characters were too perfect. I mean their personalities seemed too rushed. Maybe if you told us about ...

If I could write a billion words to describe this short story, I'd say it was beautiful, deep, brilliant, heartwarming...I mean wow, there is so many words I can use ...

What really makes a story flow?( really I think this a strange question but I want to see what others say)

If you seen my profile you probably know my name is Raven. But you don't know that I absolutely hate my name it's so common!! I love music, I can't ...

Love, Obsession, Addiction By Summer Love is the opposite of hatred. It fights chaos with its affection. For me it became an obsession. And I question what an addiction is. ...

I really loved this, please write more.

Granted, but then the chicken turns out to be a criminal and pecks you to death, then makes away with all your belongings I wish people were nice to eachother

Granted, but then you get everything wrong I wish my crush would kiss me.

Granted, but then you get fat because you don't go to the bathroom I wish life made sense

okay there were a lot of things wrong with this but overall this was really great. i have to go but i'll be back to properly critique.

Granted, but then a teacher wishes there was a long lasting supply of homework I wish my crush would pay attention to me.

I really loved this, you know it almost had me to tears. I didn't see any errors, but if there were it really wouldn't take away from this beautiful piece ...